Tuesday, January 27, 2009
Cradle to Cradle
This piece is another that does a great job of taking part not only in the solution, but also in the blame. The authors have a rapport with any reader knowing of the company they run trying to find more environmentaly friendly, sometimes off the wall strategies for approaching everyday life. Companies can even get cradle to cradle awards for being especially eco-friendly/innovative. In this exerpt, the authors manage to convey ideas that some may look at as inveasable and show that they can, in fact, be acheived. They do this by admitting that it seems like it cannot be done, then going on to explain not only how it can be done, but also the benifits, as it is with the garden rooftops. This writing contains a lot of stories of successes the authors have had - every person likes proof of a working model. Overall, a more friendly tone is taken - a lot of collective we's are used. The metaphor of the cherry tree is powerful in showing that there is a way to create useful waste if we would just stop being comfortable in what we do. As well, the inclusion of small seemingly insignificant facts such as the biomass of ants leads to meaningful facts such as though ants have a much larger biomass, they have almost no negative impact on the Earth.
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You identified a lot of positive points about this article; the only thing I would suggest would be to make it a little bit more clear how each of your points is an example of the authors establishing ethos, logos, and pathos.
ReplyDeleteI also liked the number of examples they used, especially the whole comparison about the office buildings and the differences between them. It definitely helped the reader imagine their points better and strengthened their arguments.
ReplyDeleteGreat identification of the positives of the reading in which I agree a hundred percent. I would agree with carly in that you could be clearer on ethos logos and pathos that were evident in the story.
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