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This link was well thought out. The writing goes well beyond the sufficient need to inform its viewers. It gives background information about global warming and what people are doing or what they should do to stop it. As far as persuading I think that you guys did an outstanding job on finding proper research to credit yourselves on the topic. The entertainment side was fulfilled, I especially love the subject on how different celebrities are hypocrites to their own beliefs. It was interesting and astonishing to see the different ways these people contribute largely to global warming.
They wrote in a way that flowed pretty easily. It was an interesting and fun read. They started with background information and then worked their way to what we can do about it as people. If your not happy with the way that they wrote they allow the reader to read in any order you want because all you have to do is click on the subject that interests you and read away. Overall great job.
i really like the layout of your blog and the navigation tool was very helpful. on the "good, bad and ugly" page...all the different colored text is kind of distracting, i understand that you are doing it for emphasis but maybe just make the words bold? good job!
I've spoken to a couple of you about your segments. overall, a pretty good draft. I'd like to see in the pop culture segment a category called "some good, some bad" to discuss Al Gore, e.g.
I think the greenwashing 101 page could use more development. How about some examples of greenwashing ads, like an Exxon Mobil or GE ad? Show waht greenwashing looks like. How to identify it, how to analyze it.
I really like the topic you all have chosen. As I was reading it I was thinking to myself, "actions speak louder than words", which was practically what the essay was persuading. I believe that your project covers all three of the main points (informing, persuading, and entertaining). The strong points of the project was all the information and the persuading, but I think that there could be more entertainment added though. But overall you all have done a great job so far!
ReplyDeleteThis link was well thought out. The writing goes well beyond the sufficient need to inform its viewers. It gives background information about global warming and what people are doing or what they should do to stop it. As far as persuading I think that you guys did an outstanding job on finding proper research to credit yourselves on the topic. The entertainment side was fulfilled, I especially love the subject on how different celebrities are hypocrites to their own beliefs. It was interesting and astonishing to see the different ways these people contribute largely to global warming.
ReplyDeleteThey wrote in a way that flowed pretty easily. It was an interesting and fun read. They started with background information and then worked their way to what we can do about it as people. If your not happy with the way that they wrote they allow the reader to read in any order you want because all you have to do is click on the subject that interests you and read away. Overall great job.
i really like the layout of your blog and the navigation tool was very helpful. on the "good, bad and ugly" page...all the different colored text is kind of distracting, i understand that you are doing it for emphasis but maybe just make the words bold? good job!
ReplyDeleteI've spoken to a couple of you about your segments. overall, a pretty good draft. I'd like to see in the pop culture segment a category called "some good, some bad" to discuss Al Gore, e.g.
ReplyDeleteI think the greenwashing 101 page could use more development. How about some examples of greenwashing ads, like an Exxon Mobil or GE ad? Show waht greenwashing looks like. How to identify it, how to analyze it.
Great navigation.